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description

My approach to description is that I rarely write paragraphs of straight description. Instead, it’s mixed with the POV character’s perceptions & state of mind.

It’s done for pacing, but also so, rather than digesting unbroken & dull description, the reader is barely aware they're digesting a sense of a place.

This excerpt, I hope, conveys, not just Riparia’s surroundings, but also how her mood is coloring her perceptions.

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plot evolution

My initial ideas surface at any point along the eventual story’s plot line. I take what inspiration gives, each idea breeding more.

When it appears I have a story, I write a narrative that exposes gaps & weaknesses. I then attack those while more ideas surface.

When done, I have a flexible narrative outline from which to linearly draft. I’ll create a shorthand guiding narrative & often add ideas on the fly.

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tears

Oh yes.

In Trust in the Forgotten, multiple moments remain difficult for me to read, especially aloud.

Profoundly sad & tragic will send me over the tearful edge, but so too will happy & heartfelt. Tears make it difficult to see the words. I don’t mind. If I can't feel the emotion in my own work—who will?

As a reader, the heartfelt moments that conjure happy tears are in books never forgotten & always treasured.

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can I write trauma?

I can. I’ve had praise for how well I can wrap trauma around the heart. Trauma & I, we’re old friends.

I don’t like to write it, but sometimes it’s necessary, though I shy away from deeply disturbing. Still, that's why I took precautions before writing Bk6.

It isn’t difficult to go there. The trick is getting back.

Over time, I’ve become better at distancing myself & can thank writing for that.

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 #WritersCoffeeClub Oxford Comma or no?

I love the Oxford Comma. Makes total sense the Haunted Pe... 
 @c09f86d3 Brilliant! 😃 
 The Voice that Cries (short story)
For the first time in years, I uploaded a short story to my website, one that's loosely linked to the first novel I'll publish next year.

A young woman, rescued and provided a comfortable life, suppresses the gift within so as to protect innocent people—from her.

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https://christinahawthorne.wordpress.com/2023/10/05/the-voice-that-cries/ 
 Ah, the places your feet might take you...

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 #WordWeavers 7Oct- How do your MCs handle strong emotions?

Oh boy.

Jaslan's usually good at kee... 
 @21149f3e When water becomes ice it can move mountains. Then again, watch out for those seemingly innocent volcanoes. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yeah... I can relate to som... 
 @66e742bb Have you considered seeing anyone about that? 🤣 Actually, so can I. 😬 
 #WordWeavers 7: How does your MC handle strong emotions?

Poorly. Terribly.

Briaca avoids them b... 
 @66e742bb Yikes, suppressing strong emotions for a century? That sounds like a Krakatoa event looking for a place to happen. 😱 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa similarities are handy to s... 
 @ce78dee8 Oh, they are. I can say this element is close to this and that one close to that. In fact, I do that all the time, but then what was similar for a moment changes. Still, as with reading, and while consuming the story as a reader, I'm analyzing and scrutinizing like a writer. I won't complain because I love to do it. 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa … and don’t forget the ... 
 @efa7d71c Now that you've remembered that, you'd best set to work on it. 😃 
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strong emotions

Riparia’s psychology would require a series to explain. 😉 

An introvert, she feels deeply, but has suffered greatly. Anxiety & issues with intimacy & trust abound. She tries to hide, practices calming techniques, & recites the mantra her mother taught her.

Yet, responsibility weighs & passion boils. Her long-suffering temper can spark a flash fire. She’s only unpredictable if you don’t understand her contradictions.

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comp show/movie?

Admittedly, I watch little of either, but I’m always alert for potential close fits & will seek to find out more so as to compare to what I write.

Nope. Haven't found anything.

There came the day when I realized, hey, that's a good thing. No matter if my books sell or not, I'm writing original stories!

So, having not come across a close fit, I certainly haven't found anything I wish I’d written.

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 Frustrating day. 

Was due to visit my son, but got a last minute replacement appointment through... 
 @efa7d71c Sometimes, life says, "Here, sit down. Read a good book." 😆 
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Have you ever seen something on TV or a movie close to your own ideas an... 
 @a3976b27 There's nothing wrong with writing dialogue as good as Buffy banter, which is a masterclass in how to write it. 
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I don’t know about you, but since writing I struggle to let my bra... 
 @c09f86d3 I don't watch much, and for all the reasons you just listed. The majority of what's being turned out isn't even recycled, it's a copy of a copy of a copy and so on.

The rare exceptions are typically independent films. Gee, sounds a bit like self-publishing. 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa yeah I definitely had that ... 
 @f53e7790 Thank you. I’ve worked on these stories since 2016 while better learning the craft, and that’s not counting all the stories that I’ll not publish. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa I don't know why but I thou... 
 @f53e7790 I haven’t, except for several short stories on my website. The misconception might come from the fact that I have so many stories drafted and in various stages of editing. To me, they “feel” like they’re out in the world. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Ah, guilt. It can torture o... 
 @66e742bb Thanks. It’s both a flaw and a motivator. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa It's trade's loss, that's f... 
 @66e742bb It’s not sapphic, but it’s a small taste of the world. 😃 
 "On Writing Authentically and Pursuing the Perfect Smile"

A great post aimed at writers from Tiffany Yates Martin about the futility of chasing perfection & how doing so, in the end, tends to suck the life out of what we've tried to perfect.

And still it isn't perfection because perfection is subjective.

Anyway, she makes the point better than I can. 😃 

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 @ce78dee8 @a3976b27 I think one of the keys to writing children is to start from a place of respect. I've read books where children come alive and add to the story and others where it feels like the writer put more thought into the family dog. 😬 

To me, even if they struggle to count past ten, they're still little people worthy of respect and cherishing. 🤗 

Well, okay, I also write my animals much the same, but I write the adults that way too. 😃 
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publishing status

I haven’t published any fiction, but intend to self-publish that next year. I’m a niche writer & trade wouldn’t touch me. Oh well.

I’ve maintained a blog for a decade, posting every Thursday. Yesterday I added a short story. It’s loosely linked to the first book I’ll publish, Trust in the Forgotten. It joins the other 2 stories there.

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 #WritersCoffeeClub 6: Self-pub or trad? How's it going?

Spent 6 months in the query trenches, se... 
 @ce78dee8 Do you teach at a level that helps you better understand your YA audience? 😃 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 6: Are you self-published or trad-published? How's it going?

I'm self-publish... 
 @2a9a6bfb Well done finding a niche and making it yours. 😃 
 #WordWeavers 6: Has your MC ever done anything contradictory to their values?

Oh, yeah, every on... 
 @66e742bb And if you don't obey? 😬 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 6: Are you self-published or trad-published? How's it going?

I'm soon to be s... 
 @66e742bb @3a4288d3 What a huge step that is, though. 👏 😃 
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Are you self-published or trad-published? How's it going?

I haven't publish... 
 @3b678e16 Great lesson list. I've encountered those. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Hugs 🧡 
 @d73175df Thank you. 🧡 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Sounds exciting! Especially... 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa We have a great community h... 
 @66e742bb We do. It's where I'm not alone. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa What are the anthologies ab... 
 @66e742bb Thanks for asking! 😃 

I haven't selected the exact stories for the third, but all three anthologies are built around a theme & will contain a mix of short stories & novellas that are all written.

(1) The Techsquanmic Age is a collection of historical tales leading up to modern day (for them) Pannulus & go back about 60 years.

(2) The Gender Spirited Collection is pretty self-explanatory, though the fantasy genre mix is pretty eclectic otherwise.

The third will contain mysteries. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa I decided to focus on one s... 
 @66e742bb I did that with my Kovenlore series and most people are stunned I had the patience, but I think it's paid off. Easy to say that now, I guess. 😆 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa A few, aye! Now, all I need... 
 @66e742bb That's a worthy goal! 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yes, I know. Reading your b... 
 @2ee95d3f Thanks. My big inspiration is my mother. She died at 68. Basically, she let stress consume her, then had a stroke. I have that same tendency. 😬 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yeah, I'm 65. Healthcare wh... 
 @2ee95d3f Keep that brain healthy by exercising it! Write, write, write. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa It's amazing that you have ... 
 @21149f3e Thank you! It's almost all I've done since 2015, though I had a job for two years in there. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yeah, especially at the spe... 
 @2ee95d3f I'm 64. Despite everything, I'm in good health right now, but healthcare costs are a US headwind. It's an unpredictable age in an unpredictable era, so uncertainty is a constant cloud. Hopefully, I have another decade or two in me. Hopefully, I go at my desk or on a hike. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Thank you! If nothing else,... 
 @21149f3e Writing is (and really, should be) about vulnerability. It requires a special brand of bravery. You'll do it, and you have great support to help you. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yes! There's a lot of self-... 
 @efa7d71c I agree, there's a lot of therapy in my books. What doesn't kill us makes us better writers, after all.

There's nothing wrong with post break-up tales (I've read a fair number), but wanting to explore new directions sounds great too.

Back in August 2019, I devoted 2 journal pages to "Stories: What's Important to Me." My goal was 10-12 entries. There are 26. It really focused me at the time and boosted my productivity. 
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discussing writing

A touchy topic…

Short answer: No.

Long answer: [Remarks removed.]

I’ll stop right there and end with a smile 😃 and the observation that all you folks are wonderful. Thank you.

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project goals

Short term? Chronicles' Book 1 novel scan is done, working on Book 2. Continue editing rotation. (Am considering a NaNo break).

Long term? Self-publish Book 1, Trust in the Forgotten, late next year while continuing rotation.

Longer term? Continue publishing the series (7 books) every 3-4 months until it’s all available. Then, publish two anthologies (already written) before publishing my Pannulus mysteries, etc..

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 #WordWeavers 5: How often do you discuss your writing with your real-life friends and family?

My... 
 @66e742bb Glad you have a few outlets. 😃 
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What are your writing project goals?

Right now, some of my goals are:

1. ... 
 @66e742bb You have a lot of irons in a lot of fires, but it's exciting how far you've already come. 😃 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 5Oct- What are your writing project goals?

The Way of the Wielder series:
-Fi... 
 @21149f3e Ambitious plan, but I'm sure you'll get through it. You've made it so far already! 😃👍 
 5. What are your writing project goals?
Short term: finish the clean-up of the first part's first... 
 @2ee95d3f "Old age things" are often a consideration for some of us. I understand that. 😃 
 #WordWeavers Oct. Day 05

How often do you discuss your writing with your real-life friends and f... 
 @eca01f60 I understand the "never again" stage. You might be alone where you are, but you aren't alone here. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Haha, we don't want that ... 
 @d73175df I agree. It’s amazing what can surface in the drafting and editing phases as we go deeper and deeper. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yeah, ghosting is awful, an... 
 @21149f3e @a3976b27 You shouldn't consider him again. His unprofessional behavior has broken a trust, which wouldn't bode well for any future business relationship. 🤨 
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 @a3976b27 @21149f3e Excellent point! Ghosting IS rude and unprofessional. 😠 
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 @21149f3e @a3976b27 Oh wow, I'm so sorry. You have all my sympathy. There could be lots of reasons why, but I can understand the hurt. I know I'd struggle. 🤗 

Please keep in mind, though, that it's all subjective. For all we know, the agent had a death in the family the day they started your book, or were in a car accident. That's the quagmire that is publishing. Don't let it stop you! 🤨 
 nostr:npub1yy2f70sw4mdqcx6a4ggxt6df46e4cyseyeycxd5sw6jmt0ll60ns6y7vpm nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmy... 
 @a3976b27 @21149f3e Oh my gosh, I've started books that I thought were kinda sorta similar to mine just to discover they were awful. I'd then be gripped with anxiety wondering if I've written THAT? 😱 

That's why I can see where you'd be distressed to have the agent who'd helped launch a book you couldn't finish. 😬 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa I find that I'm forgiving t... 
 @66e742bb I analyze stories SO much. I've read books where I wanted to weep for the character because they deserved a better story. I remember one  where the characters were amazing, but it was nothing but a series of unrelated events. 🤔 

On the flip side, I've read tales where I admired the intricate plot that kept me guessing, but if the MC exited the story I'd be really grateful. I'm just someone who wants to like the MC. I have to care. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yup. And in a case of a ser... 
 @66e742bb Oh my gosh, it helps me so much with drafting. Otherwise, I feel lost in the woods where I check the map on my phone and all it says is, "Good luck!" 😆 
 #WordWeavers: Character, worldbuilding-

I can break down my books into these elements, but I nev... 
 @b7ab5d68 I agree that, when examining any of my stories, it's a weave, that it's all "intertwined," as you say. Maybe more than that, to the reader it should feel like a weave they want to wear, a comfortable fit where they can't imagine it separated into parts. 😃 
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 @a3976b27 I'm starting to think he'll go anywhere they'll let him babble for well over an hour. He probably wants to be as far from Florida right now as possible so he can avoid the hurricanes that don't exist. 
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 @d73175df Thank you. At the time, I made them in Photoshop Elements, but these days I have Affinity Photo. If I was starting from scratch, I’d probably use Affinity Designer. Since I “colorized” it in sections, I can turn the color on and off in places. 😃 
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 @21149f3e Thank you so much. You're exactly right

There's been so much support this morning. It's too easy for me to slip into an over-thinking loop that then grasps at every little issue, book related or not (the election, for instance).

This is the dream and I need to focus. I need an orienting hike for my mind. 😃