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 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Life is precious, and some ... 
 @66e742bb Yes, the more I write the more I appreciate each moment I'm alive, and vice versa. I had other close calls in my life and I'll be damned if I'm going to pay that back by sitting in front of the television until someone discovers my corpse. I didn't fight my way back for seven years after the '09 scare to not make life count. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Large spiders kind of scare... 
 @66e742bb I saw one as big as my hand in a house in Florida once. My entire body went rigid except for violent shaking. I literally couldn't move. 😱 

Yet, there was the time I discovered a tiny one in the bathtub. There was no saving it because it went completely wild when it realized it was discovered. So, I washed it down the drain. I then sat on the side of the tub and cried because it'd fought so hard to live. 😢 

I'm complex. 🤔 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa To be fair with her, this p... 
 @66e742bb Impressive resumé! 👏 😃 
 #WritersCoffeeClub Sept 25 - What keeps you striving concerning your writing goals?

I have stori... 
 @bad99022 By all means, get them out! 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa What about Pamatha? 👀 
 @66e742bb What about her? 🤔😆

Their first encounter—whew!—talk about a storm (actually, there’s one happening). Pamatha disparages her attire & off we go as she discovers Tharlise can wield a sharp tongue like a surgeon.

Thing is, over time there’s growing mutual respect, despite how there’s also mutual stubbornness (& deceit on Pamatha’s part). In truth, Pamatha is also smitten. They’re a fun, tempestuous pair, two sparring partners who wish their relationship was simpler. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa nostr:npub1eeuda68pptpk52dd... 
 @a3976b27 @ce78dee8 The nice thing about publishing these days is that your books and your site and all that you've built is always there. Once someone steps into what you've built and decides they like it, they settle in. Well done! 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa nostr:npub1eeuda68pptpk52dd... 
 @a3976b27 @ce78dee8 There's so much conflicting advice that, in the end, the best approach is the one you're most comfortable with. You'll be more inclined to follow through in your efforts. Your prices seem reasonable.

I've heard from a lot of professional sources that, for self-publishers, it takes, on average, about five books before they start to gain traction (assuming the books are worth buying...that's another story). 
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 @ce78dee8 @a3976b27 That works. I think, in the long run, that what's most important is taking an approach that we're comfortable with. It's possible I'll take steps later that I'd never consider now. 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa nostr:npub1eeuda68pptpk52dd... 
 @a3976b27 @ce78dee8 I won't do free, but I will heavily discount the first book in the series, then slightly discount the second, and so on. None will be high priced. I want to make it easy for people to sample my work.

I have a short story and a flash fiction on my site and plan to add another short story soon (linked to Book 1). As I approach a year-out from publication, I'm stepping up my efforts. I'll then publish on a regular, and relatively quick, schedule. 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa soft promo seems to be the ... 
 @ce78dee8 That's how it works, create interest just being you. "Buy my book" posts rarely work because they don't hook. Sharing facts & excerpts that hook those interested can work. I've had people ask where they can get my books, which is encouraging. 
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mentioning makeup, hair, beards

I treat this list like clothing, as an extension of the character, a form of self-expression. How much depends on the character & the story. Regardless, I love doing it, especially character transformations.

In Stealing Light, Tharlise takes a lot of pride in her appearance, something Vistanna tries to emulate. It’s also a connection with her best dressed student, Davious. Then, there’s Pamatha…

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promotion

I publish next year.

Ongoing is my social media presence. My cornerstone is my weekly blog (I NEVER miss), started in early 2013. I write on numerous subjects, but recurring is my writing journey.

Most important? A good book(s).

Good books sell good books. Then, complete the series. Maybe interview. I call it soft promotion, but it's similar to word-of-mouth marketing.

It helps that I'm not obsessed with sales.

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 #WritersCoffeeClub 17: How do you promote your writing?

Not much -yet. A little on social media,... 
 @ce78dee8 I think of the ads as posting "Buy my book," but paying to do so. At least, it feels like that, especially because in this day and age, people have become really good at not seeing ads. 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 17: How do you promote your writing?

Err... promote? Is that to eat? 😅

Jo... 
 @66e742bb Just being visible goes a long ways. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yeah, poor prologues. I've ... 
 @66e742bb It certainly does. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa I've always liked an elemen... 
 @ce78dee8 The unexpected is always good. I like having an element of mystery so much I started writing Pannulus mysteries. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Not a fan of prologues, but... 
 @20d89eae Totally agree. 😃 
 This week's blog post:
Character Ignorance and Providing Information

Like everything in every story, this can feel natural or contrived. If done right, readers learn a lot without realizing they are.

To reinforce my point, I share an example from The Kovenlore Chronicles, Book 1, along with a too seldom seen bit of romance.

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https://christinahawthorne.wordpress.com/2023/09/14/character-ignorance-and-providing-information/ 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa In my mind, it really doesn... 
 @c09f86d3 I agree. No matter the plot, it's the characters that matter and the MC who matters most. That's why I start every story with the MC, including my series. 
 #WordWeavers 16Sep- How are people like your antagonist viewed?

Higher classes either approve of... 
 @21149f3e The upper classes have been finding ways to turn the abused lower classes into pitchfork toting mobs since the beginning of time...

You've tapped into a historical truth, that's for sure. The spark(s) that change everything always make for a great story. 😃 
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I personally think there'... 
 @a3976b27 Exactly. That's the beauty of modern day publishing where more authors make a modest income. They write to a modest audience that before self-publishing were frustrated in their efforts to find the books they liked.

I know because I was one of them, which is why I write what I do.

I like/dislike according to my tastes and will defend those to the death, but that doesn't mean I don't recognize and respect other authors and readers. 
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prologues (another perspective)

I want to toss this out before this becomes about rules…

The question asked for an opinion. I shared my preferences. I am, though, well aware there are readers who live for epic fantasies that begin with an equally epic prologue that explains the world.

They aren’t necessarily my audience.

But they are AN audience, a legitimate audience needing authors.

I've my own niche & won't disrespect another.

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 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Agree totally. If you write... 
 @4f83c065 This is just my own theory, but I like to think of a strong prologue that's untethered from the rest of the story by time or space as existing as a short story. Does it hold up on its own, even if it ends with a cliffhanger that requires the main story to resolve (AND the main story also needs)? Does it provide background that's critical to the main story on PAGE ONE? 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Yeah, I think this is inter... 
 @4f83c065 Unlike many who refuse to even read them, I do read them. My attitude is, an intriguing prologue hints at a good book, a boring prologue warns of a bad book. I've read a handful that were outstanding, where they provided insight before the reader knew they needed it. They then linked to later in the story as a twist. 
 #WordWeavers Day 16 - How are people like your antagonist viewed?

Oh, no-one's quite like my ant... 
 @ce78dee8 This is literally the lens of perception moving ever closer to reveal more details. Excellent. That's a great way to keep heightening reader interest with each book. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa I bet that's fun to write t... 
 @ce78dee8 You make a good point that, despite someone's best efforts, they may come across to people in a way that's different than what they intended. 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa love all the different pers... 
 @ce78dee8 Thank you! If I'd had more room I'd have added the officials he's corrupted. It's a complex question when someone works hard to paint a public persona that's different from the truth. 
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views of Kurss Rendcide

To most, he’s a wealthy businessman who donates to charities & (recently) supports private schools.

To some, he’s a competing crime boss.

To others, he viciously supports their cultist values, though perhaps too selfishly.

To law enforcement, it’s frustrating trying to link him to his crimes.

To Eclectic, which doesn’t officially exist, he’s a disease in Pannulus, no sacrifice they make too great to stop him.

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prologues

I wrote one for my 1st novel attempt 2 decades ago. I have none in any books since.

If well-crafted, they add an intriguing twist & heighten tension.

I dislike when they tease false tension, mast a weak 1st chapter, or act as backstory &/or worldbuilding info dumps. I put those books down.

Opening a book, I want the promise of a well-crafted story. For me, that starts with a hook, the MC, story questions, tension, etc..

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 #WritersCoffeeClub Do you have prologues in any of your writing? How do you feel about them? (Con... 
 @c09f86d3 Yes, I want to become invested in the first character introduced. When that isn't the MC there'd better be a good reason because it otherwise feels like the author is trying to create false tension by making me wait. 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 16: Do you have prologues?

My first book does. It introduces the MC (Ruarnon)... 
 @ce78dee8 If they serve a purpose I don't care what they're called. 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 16: Do you have prologues? How do you feel about them?

I use prologues when t... 
 @66e742bb I've seen a lot of this. Some authors are so paranoid about calling it a prologue that they call it Chapter One, 60 Years Before. Whatever works. If it gives me a glimpse of needed insight I'm onboard. 😃 
 #WordWeavers: Not feeling great. Ate some food that had something Im allergic to hidden in it, th... 
 @b7ab5d68 Hope you’re okay soon and that’s all that’s wrong. Take care. 🤗 
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neat or messy MC

Tharlise is someone that, no matter the circumstances, will be the most “put together” person present. She’s organized in her professional & private lives, though not obsessively.

Thus, the plot in Stealing Light often shoves her in front of one speeding disruption to her neatly ordered life after another. First, Braith enters her office. Then she meets irritating Pamatha. Then there’s the encounter at the park…

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conjunctions used

I’d never thought about this so I used the linguistic focus in Scrivener to examine a chapter. I don’t use all that many, as it happens (“and” seems to rule), not that I was worried about it.

I write in Deep 3rd so I’m always weighing the character’s narrative voice against reader enjoyment & comprehension. I also don’t want to do anything so often that it becomes noticeable (unless I want it to be noticed).

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 #WordWeavers 15: Is your MC neat or messy?

Qinyang is tidy and methodical to a fault. She takes ... 
 @66e742bb A clean killer. People should take pride in what they do. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa It's been a long time since... 
 @d73175df It always comes down to skill. 😆 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Oh, no! He's hopelessly in ... 
 @66e742bb Excellent, a weakness! 😃👍 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa I haven't done it at all, b... 
 @d73175df For me, it depends. If the antagonist is an active character in the story then I usually do. 😃 

What I don't like (and most people SEEM to like so I'm in the minority), is the killer POV in a mystery where each of their chapters is purposely vague so you can't guess who they are. 🤔 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Unless they get their own POV! 
 @d73175df Which is always fascinating, though I haven't done it that many times since my antagonist is more often part of the mystery. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa Thats a good rule, and in g... 
 @21149f3e You cause me to look at another element, which is how we experienced these people and the emotions we carried away. My writing is very much steeped in my experiences, so while I may not base a character on one particular person, I will draw off the residual emotions from that person (and others). 
 #WordWeavers 14 — Does your antagonist have any likable or redeemable qualities?

I assume they... 
 @d73175df Interesting point, that any antagonist is portrayed as the protagonist views them. 😃 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa It's always weird when some... 
 @d73175df Yes. It's always easier to do what you do when your public persona is charitable. He spun his wife's disappearance so he became the tragic figure while persecuting minorities & committing other atrocities. It helps when you can pay off politicians. Yup, sounds familiar. 
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likable/redeemable antag qualities

(revisiting my Day 1 response for Stealing Light)

Kurss Rendcide is a handsome man who believes deeply in what’s important to him. He’s also wields considerable power in Pannulus, thus his extraordinary confidence, determination, & success.

What people most often see is that he can display charm while donating large sums to particular charities. He also cares deeply about his elder son, Skuln.

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real people as characters?

NO.

Original stories, original characters.

I don’t write characters based on exes or anyone else I know, their name changed or not. Nor do I base characters on celebrities.

The reason is because I’d then write that person & not a character, which would become sand in my creative process. My characters are always composites & always contain at least a little of my DNA.

This is a firm rule I made long ago.

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 #WordWeavers 14: Does your antagonist have any likeable or redeemable qualities?

Oh, plenty! As ... 
 @66e742bb Is the person he's most in love with himself? 🤔 
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muse animal?

I could use logic & choose a wise ole owl (there’s one on my desk). A big part of me thinks it should be a cat.

Yet…

My inner writer demands I choose a crow. They’re more fascinating than most people realize & they’re incredibly intelligent. More than that, in Kovenlore Chronicles, Mazatta the Crow changes the course of an entire series.

I’m serious.

That’s a contribution I can’t ignore. It also grabbed my heart.

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 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa  Indeed! Could I use this e... 
 @f3529b85 Glad you enjoyed it! 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa When you do what you love, ... 
 @21149f3e I don't have anyone to tell me that. Is that good or bad? 🤔 🤣 
 nostr:npub10d5zhp5atut9hcmyyslxdr07s65tj45q72wxvg229ajwjvmpqugq6lvvxa same here.

I'm glad I fina... 
 @5a43dd67 Me too, so it's strange that I've come to the ironic conclusion that by writing I'm actually doing everything. Each character does things I could never hope to do, or dread doing. And that's just the storytelling part. I have to have some kind of organization, I make maps, etc.. As a writer, we live many lives. 😃 
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joy from writing

Because I highly involved in every story I write, I could say I experience every emotion possible while engaged in the process. Some of that flows from the characters’ experiences, but just as much is derived from the overall process.

So, joy? Absolutely.

If, though, I had to choose an adjective to describe my overall attitude, it’d be gratitude. Creativity is a gift I’m grateful to have.

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 13. Do you derive joy from writing? In what way? 

I get joy putting my fantasies down on paper. ... 
 @f3529b85 The relationships that never were...that strikes a chord with me. 😃 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 9.13 — Do you derive joy from #writing? In what way? 

Its the sheer joy of ... 
 @ce78dee8 "The chance to live a thousand lives." Well said. I feel the same. 😃 
 @66e742bb I have a brass owl in the living room and a small, plushy owl that sits on my desk (he's named Yuba after an owl character). Owls don't put up with excuses, I've discovered. They're taskmasters. 😆 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 13: Do you derive joy from your writing? In what way?

Absolutely, I do! It br... 
 @66e742bb The power of tapping into the imagination. The reality is most people don't have it. That makes us as rare as the gifted in my world. Leaving childhood with our imaginations still intact is a gift indeed. 😃 
 #WritersCoffeeClub 13Sep- Do you derive joy from writing? In what way?

I absolutely do.

At firs... 
 @21149f3e I'm glad you did, and that you're finding satisfaction and happiness. I put in far more hours on writing and related tasks than I ever put into a job and I cherish every one of them. 😃 
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 @21149f3e I do it daily, and have since 2020. Another reason, and maybe the bigger reason, is because I have issues with neck aches otherwise.

Like—I don't know—someone who spends too much time working at the computer? 🤣 
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 @ebd90c48 I'm in alignment with that! 😃