I really like this one, but I do think the copy could be tightened up a bit. Oh yeah, I volunteered to do that didn't I?
No, you volunteered for the new super secret project, hahaha But I would also happily accept any help with this!
I'm always reluctant to edit writing without request, since it's someone's actual thoughts, but if you ever need a second pair of eyes, I'm happy to help.
Yeah @dtonon def needs help with words 😂😘