Oddbean new post about login | logout It sounds great, IMO, but it's probably too wordy and some may not read it all.
I agree with this assessment
The open internet was not designed for centralized control. Take back control with Nostr.
Simple and to the point. #TakeBackControl nostr:nevent1qqsvvr6mtm4ald0esy9xv2gxq3hm60h988nzvg5cefm3gp5jsmf46dqpzemhxue69uhkummnw3ex2mrfw3jhxtn0wfnj7q3qq6mcr8tlr3l4gus3sfnw6772s7zae6hqncmw5wj27ejud5wcxf7qxpqqqqqqzw8qccs
I like this but would leave out the "centralized control" phrasinf. Not sure how to word it but focus more on where we going rather than what we are escaping from
How about corporate control?
I like centralized because it covers all the baddies - corporate, church and government.
So do I. I would assume that most people don't use that word though.
It’s about building a better society, but I am pretty happy with the escape thing. It really hit me this summer when we went out west and toured some early railroad towns - same vibe - we are on a new frontier with new technologies building a new society.
I know, quite wordy, but the goal here it is explaining the details, not doing quick onboardng, this from my point of view should be left to the individual apps (spoiler: with an exception, that you will see soon). Btw, do you refer to the first view, or the whole page?
Maybe just the first view / above the scroll. I think being informative is good and the whole page does a great job, but that first view to me just screams wordy and technical. It's not, and I don't mind reading it, but when coming from a non technical point of view, I think it's a bit much.