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 I messed around with Midjourney to create initial renderings of some of the main characters of my hobby sci-fi manuscript.

Would that movie poster interest you or nah?

https://m.primal.net/LyMn.png 
 
 It's unclear who's good or bad. But maybe that's the point.  
 It's partially the point.

If you were to guess, which would you say is good or bad? 
 Top two good. Bottom two bad. Bottom two are looking down slightly but so is top left. However, he has a light color background, like top right.

Now I will name them, top to bottom. Left to right.

Gareth
LiMei (lee-may)
Viv (short for Vivianna)
Freeman 
 
This was my alternate quadrant, if one is interested in hero/villain reads. Probably that slight top left change affects a lot.

https://m.primal.net/LyNf.png  
 It does change perception a bit (again the head angle) but I like the first picture. He's more serious and looks ready to have dirty hands while doing clean work.  
 Good take. That’s why I picked the first one. Dirty hands doing clean work is pretty on point. 
 Peaceful, not harmless.  
 this is millennial for “ill be nice and considerate until you mess with my family or my stuff. then ill bust your ass,” 
 father son top left bottom right? 
 Top left could well be bottom right but older 🤔 
 Top left looks even more like a young bottom right in this model hero version. 
 Names: Asim, Ava, Jade, Thane 
 I'd say the opposite. These two at the bottom feel like that they were nice until someone/thing forced them to take action. Become badass. 
 Suited lady possibly bad. I get freedom fighter vibes from top left man and bottom left lady. Bottom right man good turned bad (or vice-versa)… 
 My bet is they are all good. 
 ie when you think about Neuromancer, weren't the main characters basically exactly like these four?

I see Case, Molly and Armitsge here, and the Asian chick is a new addition unique to your story :) 
 Bottom left has main character vibes. 
 Funny thought. All the RPG’s in the past I’ve built a character with an eye slash. 

Not sure why but lol. 
 Who can judge from appearances, lol.

Maybe she's a big fan of cuddling, spending time on the beach, and an animal lover at heart. 
 😅🫂 
 She doesn't fuck around. 
 XP is off the charts. 😀 
 Second this 
 In partial to the silver fox 
 The highest IQ of the four for sure. 
 For better or for worse but handsome! 
 Wouldn't be able to tell ty out.  Have you written a treatment that tells the story & character archs?  If you posted it here I missed it...

@CryptoTruth 
 Fuckin stoked! 🤩 
 Hell yeah 
 Top right is not bad. Others are obvious ai. 
 I don't mean in terms of art quality itself per se since it's all AI, but rather, do those characters look interesting or not? Does a story involving those four provoke interest or not really? 
 Top right, again, does evoke some interest. The other three are just generic and don’t hold my interest. That’s just me though. I’m a sci-fi nerd from way back and seen too much cover art. 
 Left 2 characters look very spec ops, Asian chick looks business or diplomacy or something, old man looks like a modern generic businessman villain (not that that's automatically bad)

they seem like fine characters but usually a movie poster also conveys something about the setting or action, eg A New Hope poster has ships shooting lasers and explosions, plus the characters are in action poses

https://www.amazon.com/Star-Wars-Episode-Poster-Regular/dp/B00LREHN0S

just seeing your 4 characters doesn't convey who is good or bad or what sorts of things they're going to do in the film / book

another good point of comparison are the frazetta covers, where you usually have 1-2 characters shown in good detail, and some suggestion of action but you don't get the full core of the cast like the Star Wars poster

The most important prop for warriors is a weapon, usually held ready or actively in use. The male warrior seems to have a plate carrier so perhaps he should have a rifle, while the scar on the female warrior suggests close combat - perhaps she should have a blade.

If one or more of those characters is primarily characterized by wealth they should have some indicators of that wealth - such as gold jewelry, cigars, finely tailored clothing, etc.

TLDR: Not enough information to respond to your question 
 Fair.

Part of the OP is a joke. It’s just four of the main character portrait drafts in AI in a quadrant, not an *actual* trailer of any substance. It’s just that when you put four characters together it looks a bit like a trailer, was kind of my joke.

Mainly interested to see vibes of how people feel about each one visually, ignoring the fact that they’re obvious AI for the most part. 
 It’s the eye scar that absolutely steals it! 
 I'd guess that her character would surprise people the most. 
 Very much looking forward to it…ready to read anything you put to print 
 Makes me think the movie is gonna be all flash and bang and no substance. I don't know what the limits of midjourney prompting are. The background of bottom right pulls me in, looks like something back there could be interesting, could be scene setting perhaps. 
 Good feedback.

The content is actually really substance-based first and foremost. Character-driven, and very introspective.

AI pictures often have a slightly artificial aspect which gives us flash/bang/surface vibes. But believe it or not, the story is about the inner lives of these people as much as the outer lives. And two other people but they're more spoilers, so these are the four that are easier to show. 
 Yeah, I figured a good bit of the issue is the limitations of AI. 
 Yaaasss 
 Bitcoin broke a lot of sci-fi novels for me: frozen accounts and permissioned money - things I know will not exist, even in the not too distant future.  

Lyn: this is going to be a bellwether work of fiction, and any advanced civilization I can think of is going to use something like bitcoin.   

I don’t even know what the story is, but I know I want to read it! 
 For sure! 
 Absolutely. A good start! Now bring some context to these characters for us 🙏 
 "When a terrorist with strange powers begins wreaking havoc in an increasingly deadly series of attacks, federal investigator Asim Rahal must race against the clock to determine her whereabouts and find a way to stop her. In doing so, he realizes that the rabbit hole goes deeper than he thought." 
 so a federal agent fell down the rabbit hole! that must be interesting 
#bitcoin
 
 That's a "YES!" from me! 
 Lyn you got a thing for middle eastern guys shshahshs 
 Fair. 
 Bottom left ↙️ or bottom right↘️. 
 Do you view those two as likely heroes, anti-heroes, or villains? 
 The lighting doesn’t help. There is bias in the lumens. 

Bottom left anti hero. Bottom right I don’t trust, but has a valuable role. 
 As a movie poster, I think we need to wait until MJ can make you a poster with multiple such characters interacting, or at the very least present them with more situational context to trigger more curiosity. Nothing wrong with how are rendered, but individually they don't make me want to read anything to discover who are the pro/antagonists. 
Having said that, might be way faster to provide these as inputs on Airtasker and throw few hundred bucks to a 3rd world artist to entangle these figures in a more compelling setting.   
 Yeah, these are initial renderings, not intended as a legit movie poster. The movie poster point was kind of a joke.

Before having an artist work on them, I’d figure them out in AI like this and get feedback as something to give to the artist. 
 My reptilian brain is most attracted to and therefore most curious about Scarface. They could all believably be light or dark side.  
 Using AI to assess AI character art as follows: 

- Bottom Left (Woman with Scars and Tactical Gear): “Villain”
This character’s piercing eyes, dark demeanor, and the scars suggest a dangerous, perhaps vengeful individual. The darker tones, combined with her hardened appearance, hint at a villainous role — someone who may have been through trauma or betrayal and now acts ruthlessly, possibly as a mercenary or antagonist.

- Bottom Right (Older Man with Grey Hair and Intense Gaze): “Villain”
His aged yet powerful appearance, combined with the intense, calculating look, suggests he is a mastermind or powerful antagonist. The dark suit and background with mathematical symbols hint at a strategic, possibly intellectual villain. He could be a manipulative leader, using intellect and influence to achieve his goals, regardless of the harm it causes. 
 I'm in... Where is the first screening?? ;) 
 When Lyn AI full length movie?! 
 I don't know, I can only handle so much "dark and brooding" 🙂 
 Top left has a big sarcastic/comedic aspect. He went through dark-brooding like 15 years ago and graduated from that.

Top right is kind of bubbly. ^-^

Bottom left is dark and brooding. :(

Bottom right is too obsessed with his work to brood.
 
 To be clear, I'm all for some 🙂

I'm over how little personally/intellectual diversity that there tends to be in modern TV/movies, and it sounds like there is some which is nice, but it isn't obviously reflected in the poster, so if that's all I was going on...

That said, I have fairly particular taste, and don't know if it's refined, or just annoyingly picky 😁 
 Bottom right reminds me of Baylan Skoll. 
 I updated the one on the top right.

AI generation makes it hard to get expressions right. Not only would her character definitely be smiling, she'd probably be trolling the others for looking so serious in their profile pics.

https://m.primal.net/LyTR.png 
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 No. I watch only movies of the last century. Today is all dark and fake 
 bottom left reminds me of Kate Beckinsale in Underworld 
 Did you just describe yourself to the AI for bottom left? 
 Yes, super dope 🤙🏼 
 Yep 100% 
 Nah, it looks ugly for poster. 
 Hell yeah.  
 Love the bottom left character! So mysterious and strong 🔥 
 Are the two women the same one, in different universes though? 
 vibes only:
Top row would bore me: action & court
Bottom row has more mystique. Left: game character, Jen from Witcher. Right:     hates his situation - had to chosen between only immoral choices 
 Nice but also get inspired by drawings like Jean Henri Gaston Giraud aka Moebious. 

https://surrealismtoday.com/jean-giraud-moebius/ 
 But from your pictures the bottom left girl feels strong & enigmatic.  
 Top left guy is Roy Kent 
 The Girl in the left corner looks cool. The rest a bit convencional. Maybe work a little bit more on it , a bit deeper. But I am sure  it is  a lot of fun and it will be great 👍🏾  
 The whole point of a book is leaving it to the reader's imagination. This defeats that.