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 @0e1a2ef0 That's lovely, John.  The little passage of firefly like light that winds through it in the bottom right quarter is a great idea. 
 @954ecf94 Thanks, Julian. I found the lower right detached and confusing. I thought a 'path' might ground it. The thought of a firefly flightpath has greater appeal! 
Encouraging to get such a positive response to a piece I had struggled with.