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 #WordWeavers 10/3: How do you convey characters' emotions.

This is the crux of all great writing, isn't it? You could have a crap plot, but if your readers connect emotionally with the characters, you're gold!

With that in mind, Yes, generally it's better to show and not tell, but if I need to spell it out plain and simple sometimes, then that's what I'll do. I also like to use personification for emotions.

i.e. his rage scorched the assembly, burning the face of any who dared meet his eyes. 
 @091f4e87 I like this example!