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Michelle | 1 years ago (raw) | export | reply | flag 
 The amalgam 
Of Sun’s mercy, 
Embered waves 
Of liquid gold
Soothes the 
Landscape, 
Smooths the 
Jagged shore
Of my longing 

#Poetry
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a96c3806 | 1 years ago (raw) | root | parent | reply | flag 
 @5435aaa1 

*Embered waves 
Of liquid gold*

Made me catch my breath.
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7f80d53a | 1 years ago (raw) | root | parent | reply | flag 
 There is no point in poetry that evokes no reaction, @a96c3806  & @Michelle.  Never be ashamed to feel it.