@6e9427cf @da5013b0 

Sounds worth putting out there with a small forward and proper tagging so people know in advance what they are getting.

As for my experiment, I learned, careful of how many characters you have and an understanding of why most stories only have 2 main characters. Also if I want to write action pulp, I need to do a lot of work on improving my ability to write fight scenes. Like I said too ambitious.  That is three new things I was trying all at once. 

 @ae1a0ada @da5013b0 

...That is three new things I was trying all at once...

As my favorite MC is fond of saying, "If I don't win, I will have learned something about myself."