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tigs | 3 months ago (raw) | root | parent | reply | flag 
 I don't think I've ever read any poetry that uses 5 or 7 syllables like you do... It's really really cool and also the poem is lovely! Feels like a lullaby.
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Kennedy 🫎 | 3 months ago (raw) | root | parent | reply | flag +4 
 Thanks so much 🫑
Been writing forever ♾️ 

Still no idea how to get back …
Wait that’s untrue 🀣

Into 
Well may Be 
Time to become 
Intoxicated 

Opening my lap 
Top

Taken off or on…

(Focus, weirdo) 

Old laps on top 
Nibbles at pieces 
Of swollen Apple 🍎 

That I knew at age four 
Was my destiny
Fated

Fallen 
Or Broken
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tigs | 3 months ago (raw) | root | parent | reply | flag 
 Love the way it starts 2-3-4-5,

then had me laughing out loud with the (Focus, weirdo) part. And then thinking about my mindset when I was four. You've got a really awesome talent!!
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Kennedy 🫎 | 3 months ago (raw) | root | parent | reply | flag +3 
 THANK YOU πŸ™ Truly. 

Just started writing again a few years ago. It’s nice to know it is impactful. Humbled πŸ«‚
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tigs | 3 months ago (raw) | root | parent | reply | flag 
 Words will always have impact, but your words contain more than that... certain degrees of passion and witticisms are planted throughout. Really really nice! πŸ’œπŸ₯°πŸ«‚
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Kennedy 🫎 | 3 months ago (raw) | root | parent | reply | flag +2 
 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

Well done compliment πŸ«‚πŸ«‚πŸ«‚πŸ«‚πŸ«‚πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ