I like the story, but I don't quite follow... Seem like there are jumps from one time period to another — This is a comment on: https://yakihonne.com/flash-news/nevent1qqyyqaxttzquwmx7qgsdjmsyqaxdulatgsx2gn7xup4dvl9t282cw70hjzxyukzn3gx6v0grqsqqqqqpvp96td