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 #WritersCoffeeClub Do you include bodily functions in your stories?

Yes. What surprised me in my beta reader feedback is men were absolutely fine with the lead character being vocal about her endometriosis, but the women questioned if I should remove it altogether to make it inclusive.

I always add menstruating in my stories because they are uncomfortable, often painful and inconvenient. The menstrual cycle is not a quick, random body function, it’s a fortnight a month of feeling like crap. nostr.fmt.wiz.biz